Author: benan2017

I gazed up, looking at the dark branches of a tree, it was wonderful how nature could develop such amazing creatures, birds were cheeping in their small handmade nests, crying for their hunger, I stepped back on the steep grassy hill and saw an astonishing creature fly below the clouds, the mother had come back with food, mouth by mouth, the babies took a few seconds before swallowing it. The next afternoon, I sat down in the same spot and rested. The birds were about to fly, I furiously stood up, and thought to myself “aren’t they too young to fly?!”. I fled towards the tree watching them take off in the distance, I was relieved.

… I didn’t realise they could fly…

Every time I go near that park, I always wonder to myself why is that silver statue there? Every day I walk past it and see a clear image of myself. I was walking my dog the next morning, and it just looked like it moved a few cm’s. I was so confused that I just forgot about it, the next night I went to see what was up with that odd statue, eventually I got to the park, the wind swiftly hit my head like it was trying to tell me something, I looked at the middle of the park and it was gone. I nervously looked back shaking in fear, and the statue was there. I woke up and was the statue in the middle of the park.

I was at the airport, about to go to Japan. I was sitting in my seat trembling with excitement, when it just wouldn’t take off. Hours came past before I had enough. I stomped to the front and looked out of the window, there was.. A duck and its cute ducklings??? Eventually the ducks were gone, we were about to fly when suddenly a bird carrying weights went past, following that was a bunch of donkeys and shreks. I was so confused I didnt even want to know what would come next, I looked through the window one more time… And there was a minecraft creeper. I was shocked in horror, the creeper looked straight at us, red eyes like blood. Its colours were blinking from white to green, it exploded…

It was the darkest night in the year, I was at my house having avocados when suddenly it was flooding, I went to high ground before it drowned me. I was at the roof top, the water raised up to my neck. I was in trouble. I jumped down in the water and saw purple rusty bones, it as horrifying. Seahorses were swimming around me like they were connected to me. I saw 5 tsunamis coming towards me. When suddenly, there was a helicopter right in front of me.  I quickly jumped in it, and the first thing I saw was a elephant poster. I didn’t care because I was saved.

I was at my home when suddenly I saw this little item in my wall, so I took it and as I turned my head, the world spun, I was spinning in circles and couldn’t see where I was going. Finally I dropped and landed on grass next to a huge tree. “Where am I?” I slowly turned my head and there were buildings twice as big as ours. I stood up looking at everything, I ran towards the city asking what this place is, they said it was the Melbourne city, 2200… I run towards this huge ceremony, the sign said “whoever wins gets to go forward in time or backwards” I suddenly realised this could be my chance of going back to 2019. So I entered the race. I chose my car and the race started. I went in front of everyone and before I knew it I was at the finish line. I felt relieved…

Dear parents and children,
On the 14th of august 2019, Moonee ponds primary school will be holding a science night, it is at 6 – 7 pm at the SPC. We are celebrating the 50th anniversary of the first moon landing. Our topic is “destination moon”. There will be a lot of cool creations, so you are welcome to bring family members. Please come and experience our amazing creations.

Hi Alex,
Your story was really funny when the domino’s had legs and arms, and could run fast.
But what you can work on is putting apostrophes in the right spot.

Hi Adrian,
I liked how you used tier 3 words like tormented and how you used noises like “whoosh”
What you can work on is your ideas.

Hi Gianni,
Your ideas were really good,
But what you can work on is your spelling and punctuation.

Hi Adam,
Your ideas in this 100WC were amazing,
what you can work on is using punctuation like speech marks when someone is talking, and say the people who are talking.

 

 

The two new giant domino’s appeared out of nowhere. Nobody knew what it was or where it came from but the only thing everyone knew was it was there. Others say it dropped down like a meteorite crushing through everything in its path, while the rest say it got teleported there. everyday people kept crowding around it like it was a celeb. It became the new word on the streets, scientists researched holding back any info they could get, nothing was helpful, “it’s like it came from another planet” said others deeply thinking. The only company that knew about it was… DOMINO’S PIZZA!

 

The news struck information about a boy he got lost in the woods, and was seen wearing a hat in the woods.
Nick was watching his favourite news after a stormy night. It wasn’t a good time for him to watch scary news at night since he was already scared of the dark. He was walking to the kitchen after spotting a hat, next to a cup of coffee, It was familiar from the hat on the news, “why was that hat on the table?” he said shivers down his spine. He looked up stairs and saw a shadow, His nightmare came true…

I decided I wanted a new scooter, so i went to get one! Unfortunately i was late. The next day i went to get one and rode past blood red roses and past transparent water into town, finally i was there and could see all the shops. I went into the scooter/bike shop and there it was a brand new scooter in front of my own eyes, i gave it a go, and it was amazing! I excitedly went past the neighbourhood with my brand new rose red scooter. I was happy i bought it, until i forgot about school…