It was the darkest night in the year, I was at my house having avocados when suddenly it was flooding, I went to high ground before it drowned me. I was at the roof top, the water raised up to my neck. I was in trouble. I jumped down in the water and saw purple rusty bones, it as horrifying. Seahorses were swimming around me like they were connected to me. I saw 5 tsunamis coming towards me. When suddenly, there was a helicopter right in front of me. I quickly jumped in it, and the first thing I saw was a elephant poster. I didn’t care because I was saved.
Great job Ben just saying you have to put an “an” when there is a vowel at the start in the next word