Hi Alex,
Your story was really funny when the domino’s had legs and arms, and could run fast.
But what you can work on is putting apostrophes in the right spot.
Hi Adrian,
I liked how you used tier 3 words like tormented and how you used noises like “whoosh”
What you can work on is your ideas.
Hi Gianni,
Your ideas were really good,
But what you can work on is your spelling and punctuation.
Hi Adam,
Your ideas in this 100WC were amazing,
what you can work on is using punctuation like speech marks when someone is talking, and say the people who are talking.